Film Opening - Final piece

We posted our final product and asked for some feedback from friends to tell us what they liked and what they thought we could adress/improve :

Daniel Finn : I really like the vintage quality to your film and also you made the location work well. highlights including the the tacking shot out of the tent into the sunlight, tracking shot from behind josh and the film title blending the shot into an image. you could of perhaps of given the shots colder look to them in post edit to cancel out the sunny weather but good stuff.

Thomas Graves : Worked very well with the set and feel of the music and picture quality fitted very well with the theme, very straight ahead beginning, lots of plot development, can't really think of anything wrong with it.